Monday, October 31, 2011

Tuesday Poem: Last Beach Poem







October Kite On The Beach

A silent delicate bird
floating, serene
in the steady wind,
oblivious, detached
and out of reach,

above the tired fishermen
toting poles
and empty
buckets to the car,

the line of beach-chaired women
trading stories, mouths ajar,
their laughter interweaving
with the screech and
whine of hungry gulls,
the whoops from teenage boys
riding the waves in wetsuits,
looking like happy seals
until they rise out of the surf,
and drag their boogie boards
behind them on the sand,
the wild applause as newlyweds
make their entrance
at the Surf Club,
and the band kicks in so they can

begin their Mr. and Mrs. dance.

All the while, kite leans,
shimmies, then steadies above it all,
like the lives we put on hold to come here,
attached to us by invisible string.

Here is our chance to see
how beautiful
they look at a distance,
how normal, even happy,
as time, like the wind, pushes hard,
how gracefully they hold.

2 comments:

Kathleen Jones said...

I really, really love the last two stanzas that take the poem beyond description into the metaphysical. Lovely!

Mary McCallum said...

Yes, what Kathleen says! Eileen - I write often about the beach as I live right beside one, a quieter beach than you describe but all this week there have been kites! they hold the eye, don't they? delightful really. Anyway, last week I posted one a beach poem on my blog that echoes yours a little - different, though, no kite in this one - and not hovering above but hovering in I guess ... http://mary-mccallum.blogspot.com/2011/10/tuesday-poem-lassoed.html